This a great opportunity to comment on my learning. When commenting please answer these following questions :
- What did you like best about my portfolio and portfolio conference? What would you like to see me improve on in my portfolio?
- From your point of view, which of my attainments of the 4 traits of writing is of most value? Please explain why you feel it is important and what about my documentation of it impresses you.
- Which of the traits of writing would you like me to focus on in the coming semester?
Here's the link to my Webpages : www2.k12.hi.us/~kcaguillo/HomePage.html
I'm very impressed of what you have done in your webpage and how you organized your work. I like the fact that you neatly organized your assignments and I can easily view the different writings and essays. I can't suggest any improvement at this time but just continue to focus and continue to organize your work because organization is the key to a good writing.
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I like how you explained to navigate to different sections of your portfolio. Although I am not computer savvy and don't know much about webpages, I sure enjoy reading your writings. The personal experiences you incorporated into your writing I believe is of most value, however, I would like to see more of it in your future essays.
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