Here's what I like...I like the concept of the poster with the photos and stuff, but I really think you can do waaaaay much better. Another thing....I've seen something like this already. I really don't want to give you much of a hard time with your poster. However, it would be nice if you came up with something else to capture what "Coming of Age" is to you. That's all I have to say, for now probably. Well, I'm outties! Bye! (:
I like that you used photos to show that you are "coming of age" but I definately agree with Sharmaine that you can do better than this. You should make a poster that is different from others because the whole "collage of photos" has been used a lot. You can try making it have a theme, I don't know what kind of theme to specifically give you but you can look at other peoples posters for an idea. Like mines is apples from a tree, sharmaine's poster is stairs, traci's poster is a puzzle, and shaneika's poster is a map, you see? When it has a theme it makes it unique. At least this is a draft, so show off your photoshop skills for the final! That's all I can tell you for now. Kaybye.
Hey there Kevin Caguillo! (:
ReplyDeleteOkay, I'm going to comment on your poster now.
Here's what I like...I like the concept of the poster with the photos and stuff, but I really think you can do waaaaay much better. Another thing....I've seen something like this already. I really don't want to give you much of a hard time with your poster. However, it would be nice if you came up with something else to capture what "Coming of Age" is to you. That's all I have to say, for now probably. Well, I'm outties! Bye! (:
-Sharmaine
HOLA AGT BUDDY!
ReplyDeleteHere are my thoughts on your COA Poster:
I like that you used photos to show that you are "coming of age" but I definately agree with Sharmaine that you can do better than this. You should make a poster that is different from others because the whole "collage of photos" has been used a lot. You can try making it have a theme, I don't know what kind of theme to specifically give you but you can look at other peoples posters for an idea. Like mines is apples from a tree, sharmaine's poster is stairs, traci's poster is a puzzle, and shaneika's poster is a map, you see? When it has a theme it makes it unique. At least this is a draft, so show off your photoshop skills for the final! That's all I can tell you for now. Kaybye.
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Hi Kevin,
ReplyDeleteWhat can I say? Sharmaine and Shannel did a great job of commenting...and they gave you some good suggestions...so go for it :)
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